ext_46377 ([identity profile] simons-flower.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lindenharp 2009-03-15 07:28 am (UTC)

I'm always so delighted when you post another chapter to this because it's a treat to read, this chapter being no exception.

I loved the analogy of saber-rattling () -- it just tickled me and delighted me because it seemed so perfect though it annoyed me because I didn't think of it.

The ending? Not so good for our intrepid trio. Good for the author to keep the readers hanging (*glares at author*), not good for the characters. I eagerly await the next chapter.

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