Yay! I adore the changes you made to the last part.

Favorite bit:

He had something clever to say. He's certain he did, only he can't recall it just at the moment, because his arms are full of Rose Tyler, and Jack Harkness is wrapped around both of them. The warmth of their human bodies against his feels like sunshine after a winter night. Thank you, he says silently to whatever Fate or Power gave him this undeserved gift.


Wonderful.

They're all together again, the Doctor figured it out, it's all going to be okay! *hops*