I LOVE this! You've combined three things that I adore - Victorian Britain, Scooby-Doo-like mysteries and Jack/Ten - into a fantastic story that was just a pleasure to read. The small details you come up with - like comparing 51st century pheromones to the scent of flowers - make your writing beautifully rich and delightful. I admit, I had a bit of trouble keeping the OCs apart, but not enough to distract from the story as a whole.

I'm so glad that you're working on a sequel to this, I really, really want to read more from this 'verse!