Persiflage (
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2008-08-24 05:03 am (UTC)
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This is lovely stuff, as usual!!
Small typo:
Our of the corner of his eye, Jack can see Martha begin to speak, then snap her mouth shut.
"Out" not "Our"
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Small typo:
Our of the corner of his eye, Jack can see Martha begin to speak, then snap her mouth shut.
"Out" not "Our"