This was *perfect*! ...And I really don't know what else to say. This is exactly how I could see Jack and the Doctor dealing and trying to heal. I love the nuance of this story, the way everything is really shades of grey. Also, your writing style is amazing! It drew me in right away and kept me glued to the page (well, screen). And Anaphu's POV is just so wonderful in not only its overall voice, but all the little details you thought of that I really wish there was more of it. I'm moving right on to read the sequel, now!
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Date: 2012-04-04 11:30 am (UTC)Also, your writing style is amazing! It drew me in right away and kept me glued to the page (well, screen). And Anaphu's POV is just so wonderful in not only its overall voice, but all the little details you thought of that I really wish there was more of it.
I'm moving right on to read the sequel, now!