Date: 2008-08-17 09:27 am (UTC)
ext_3965: (Champion Martha)
This is excellent. I love the switches you have in Jack's personality between light-hearted messing about when they're plotting to deal with Linton to the darkness of his attitude towards Turner. And the way Martha understands him so well, and works to maintain a balance.

The references to her experiences during the YTNW are moving.

And the ending is a Cliffhanger of Doom (TM)!!
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