Date: 2008-08-24 05:03 am (UTC)
ext_3965: (Champion Martha)
From: [identity profile] persiflage-1.livejournal.com
This is lovely stuff, as usual!!




Small typo:

Our of the corner of his eye, Jack can see Martha begin to speak, then snap her mouth shut.

"Out" not "Our"
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