I've been doing something like this myself, with Torchwood One rather than the staff of the Valiant
The voice here is wonderful - it sounds like an actual person talking, someone I can hear in my head.
And just the phrase primum non nocere on the Valiant of all places, just... gah.
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Date: 2009-01-27 07:27 pm (UTC)Neat! Are they posted somewhere?
Thank you. Voice is very important to me, in reading and writing, so I'm always happy when someone says I've done it effectively.
That's where it's most needed.